Monday, 10 October 2016

Counting

In'ya Yuri Atasi
Fariz Muhammad R
M Haekal Azariansyah
Qinthari Rizky A
Sabina Maritza



Hasil gambar untuk dark alley



NARRATIVE TEXT

once upon a time. there was a girl who felt grateful with her life. one day, she watch news in television and it says that citizens must be careful because of the murder. She was shocked. She was calling with her boyfriend so she wasn't that afraid. The next day she woke up at 7am, she was late for work, so she was hurried.She searched the shortest way to her office. She found an alley and she believed that it was the shortest way to her office. In front of the alley, she saw an old woman who spoke "99...99...99". she was curious, so she asked her. but the old woman didn't answered, instead she kept counting. Because she was late so she continued her walk. There was a man who used black outfit with a mask, he was following her in that alley. At first she didn't noticed that she was followed by him but when she knew there was a knife beside her neck she shocked,and when she looked back that man pushed the knife until her neck's bleed, and finally he killed her. And the woman spoke "100...100...100...."










DIALOGUE

Once upon a time there was a girl who felt grateful with her life. one day, she watch news in the television

R1 : " there was a murder at Venzicu street, the killer still not found"
R2 : " citizens must be careful, and also always pray for safety"
 (In call)
G   : " Do you know the news about murder case in Venzicu street?"
G   : "Okay, I will be careful and pray, thank you"
G   : " Okay Goodbye"

The next day she woke up late and she was hurried.

F    : "Oh My God! wake up! you have to work!"
G   :  "Huh? what time is it?"
F    : "It's 7am"
G   : "I'M LATE FOR WORK"

She searched the shortest way to her office.

G : (open the maps) "Where is the shortest way to the office?"
G : (speak to herself) "Okay I have to walk this way"

(In front of alley)

G : "It must be the shortest way to the office"
G :  "Who is that?What is she doing here?"

walk towards the old woman.

G : " excuse me mam, what are you doing here?"
W : "99...99...99"
G:  "Mam?"
W : "99...99...99"
G : "oh well, I'm late for work, have a good day mam"

She continued walk to the alley.
G : "why I don't feel so good about this place"

The man killed her.

L : (smiled) "100...100...100"

And she kept counting.


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